To who it may concern, I am going to introduce myself as a writer, My name is Jorge Garcia and I became a writer at the start of this winter semester and I believe my voice should be heard metaphorically and physically, The way I express my voice when I write is by writing and making it sound as if I was right there beside you talking with you, guessing your brain process and trying to guess what you are talking and trying to have a conversation through the text, I use very simplistic words and ways of explaining the the things I want to get across with the reading so they know what I am taking about, 99 percent of people don’t talk in a very convoluted way when talking to their friends, family or significant one, which is the way I want to convey my writing. One of my strengths is that when I try to write the way I intend to like I said earlier, it usually works, sometimes when the critiquer tells me this it is either a complement or a critique  but I take it as a complement either way, I think I am doing pretty going when it’s talking about the style I want to keep writing about. But my negatives are that when writing an essay that cant have that personality input I usually do pretty mediocre or just plain bad because of my small range of vocabulary and sometimes my raw use of language not sounding swiftly when people read my writings having a lot of grammatical errors, like not having commas were they are supposed to be in and things of that measure that just dont help my writing in any form. I am hoping to improve in these departments so I can be a better writer, maybe write a book about something I am passionate about and sound cool and usse words like caveat or eclectic and have other people be jealous at it like “oh my god that was such a good book”. I hope I can level up my writing.